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征求demo演唱着,歌曲在page 1第一帖
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本帖最后由 kry183 于 18-3-2012 07:53 PM 编辑
有人愿意为我演唱这首歌的demo吗?chorus部分有喊的
谢谢。。。![](static/image/smiley/onion/onion (3).gif)
45 days
verse:
I'm waiting for the dream will never ending
and glooming on the flower with my tears
I'm drowning under her's light of sorrow
and looking for the answer but is meaningless for all
chorus:
When I cry, love is falling
When I die, love is nothing
When I cry, love is falling
When I die, love is over
[music]
verse:
I'm waiting for the dream will never ending
and glooming on the flower with my tears
I'm drowning under her's light of sorrow
and looking for the answer but is meaningless for all
chorus:
When I cry, love is falling
When I die, love is nothing
When I cry, love is falling
When I die, love is over
[solo]
chorus:
When I cry, love is falling
When I die, love is nothing
When I cry, love is falling
When I die, love is over |
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发表于 30-6-2006 06:24 AM
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第二首有词的歌
作这首歌比 Taking Away 还要早期,也是第一首自己填词的歌。
一样是midi file, 之前录过了,不过找不到在那里了.....![](static/image/smiley/default/sweat.gif) ![](static/image/smiley/default/sweat.gif)
迟些会录过.....
Waiting
Midi 按这里听
[Waiting] Demo 下载 [upload at 3rd April 2007]
verse 1:
maybe you will see me
i fall in love
there must be ther way
there is something changing
my heart is fading
when you're coming from
pre chorus:
when i'm gone
when i'm fault
i'm fall in love with you
there is time to fly
there is time to cry
never again
chorus:
i'll been waiting
i'll been waiting
i'll been waiting inside your heart
verse2:
maybe you will hate me
there something wrong
i not need to cry
never feel my breaking
there's only ending
when you're leave for
outro chorus:
i'll been waiting
i'll been waiting
i'll been waiting
i'll been waiting
i'll been waiting inside your heart
[ 本帖最后由 kry183 于 3-4-2007 08:42 AM 编辑 ] |
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发表于 30-6-2006 08:33 AM
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耶~~看到写英文词的朋友了~~
有人作伴了~~
呵呵
kry183,其实你的词很简单,很容易让人明白呢。。。
只是语法上有错误哦…像是i'll been waiting、when i'm gone…
还有it的后面的verb是要+s的…
有空也来我的帖给我的2首英文词批评与意见吧~
一起加油![](static/image/smiley/default/smile.gif) |
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发表于 3-7-2006 03:24 AM
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发表于 5-7-2006 06:18 AM
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今晚终於填了第三首歌的词......歌曲命名为 Zig, 转弯的意思。
这首歌写了很久,就是还没有填词,现在终於填上去了。看回去也是一样觉的怪怪的.......看来还不是很行....![](static/image/smiley/default/sweat.gif) ![](static/image/smiley/default/sweat.gif)
加入了demo
Zig
Midi下载
Demo下载
verse 1:
the night is down in shadow
the life is down forever
until the moon of the shining
can be desacralize
it have to stay away
and have to left you away
and what you need to realize
that you will never believe
wake up my forsaken
chorus 1:
wake up my nasty sorrow
to stop my anti narrow
my tears will far away and
give tomorrow light
wake up, staying my way
love sucks, burning my mind
the light will never ending
save another life
verse 2:
the night is down in shadow
the life is down forever
until the moon of the shining
can be desacralize
it have to stay away
and have to left you away
and what you need to realize
that you will never believe
pre chorus:
i will mistaken
i will forgotten
i try to scream my sound
why cann't ever made it to last
all my life have been missing
for the rain can be change into drifting
bridge:
wake up, forsaken
wake up, compression
wake up, soul breaking
and never turning back
wake up, forsaken
wake up, compression
wake up, soul breaking
and never turning back
chorus 2:
wake up my forsaken sorrow
(mistaken)
my tears will far away and
give tomorrow light
wake up, staying my way
love sucks, burning my mind
the light will never ending
save another life
[ 本帖最后由 kry183 于 17-1-2007 07:39 AM 编辑 ] |
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发表于 5-7-2006 02:43 PM
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"ZIG"是punk rock吧~
套一句〖非常Super Band〗的话,这首歌节奏很紧凑,很动感,GOOD~
相信会是一首很好压场&开场的歌~
词嘛…我知道你想表达的东西,因为我是华人~呵呵
就是有语法上的错误,再接再厉哦!
填词不容易,一起努力吧~![](static/image/smiley/default/handshake.gif) |
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发表于 5-7-2006 09:41 PM
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英文歌在这里好像是‘外星人’一样...............
被当成外星人了....... |
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发表于 6-7-2006 11:47 AM
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呵呵,不错!!终于看到有人以英文歌词来发表!!
还没有听您的歌曲。
不过,看了你的歌词觉得相当不错,有进步的空间,加油!!
学无止境,共勉之... |
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发表于 6-7-2006 05:32 PM
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原帖由 kry183 于 5-7-2006 09:41 PM 发表
英文歌在这里好像是‘外星人’一样...............
被当成外星人了.......
畢竟這裡的朋友都是寫華語詞的…不然就是廣東詞…
還真的沒有几個是寫英文的呢…
不然你也嘗試寫寫華文詞,如何?![](static/image/smiley/default/biggrin.gif) |
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发表于 7-7-2006 03:20 AM
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原帖由 xiaojing 于 6-7-2006 05:32 PM 发表
畢竟這裡的朋友都是寫華語詞的…不然就是廣東詞…
還真的沒有几個是寫英文的呢…
不然你也嘗試寫寫華文詞,如何?
正在尝试写着华语歌词,等写好了在放上来吧.
到时还要请多多指教.... |
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发表于 7-7-2006 02:15 PM
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很喜欢你的曲子!!
不如你把你的曲子放上来让人帮你填词吧~~~ |
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发表于 10-7-2006 09:17 AM
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那我就给你加油加油喽!
同意钦贤的话
多放上来让大家一起交流! |
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发表于 10-7-2006 06:44 PM
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发表于 12-7-2006 10:41 PM
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原帖由 kry183 于 3-7-2006 03:24 AM 发表
我写了整十首歌,不过只是填了两首歌的词罢了..........
有时看自己填的词也觉的怪怪的....![](static/image/smiley/default/sweat.gif) ![](static/image/smiley/default/sweat.gif)
放一首自己写的instrumetal歌吧,第一首自己作的纯乐器音乐。
写这首歌也是因为要参加比赛,幸运的成为 ...
比起一般Pop Punk风格的Zig,
个人更喜欢这一首。(歌名?)
在Moody和Metal之间游走,相当抢耳。
这也是MIDI弄的么? |
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发表于 13-7-2006 02:33 AM
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咦? 你所莫时候发了酱的一个贴哦?
一定很爽列? 酱多人称赞.
酱几时要请我吃maggie goreng besar ?
当精华后再请我吃多一碟maggie goreng besar啦!! |
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发表于 13-7-2006 11:51 AM
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发表于 13-7-2006 11:57 AM
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写了一首华语歌曲了, 取名为 <在回首>
再回首
demo下载
verse:
当不知时间过的会比一般快
唯有知道身边一切情节不曾过
不再为曾经创伤流下一滴泪
在凌晨时分已经抛弃了一切
pre-chorus:
在这里,我们不再牵着手
回忆里,你已经不再出现
这世界,只剩下我和你
不了解,为何不可以放弃,我不想逃避
chorus:
如果真的要走
就算流浪到天涯海角也没有想过
停留的足迹
为何放不了,如何不再哭泣
我用尽所有去爱你,只剩下眼泪
再回首,只留下我们的空虚
[ 本帖最后由 kry183 于 17-1-2007 07:39 AM 编辑 ] |
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发表于 13-7-2006 12:22 PM
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背景音乐太小声。。
不过知道你要表达什么。。
这首可以很滚。。可以让它滚起来。。
快点编曲。。让它热起来。。哟。。
歌词方面:
一切情节不曾过
你要说什么? |
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发表于 13-7-2006 05:09 PM
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发表于 14-7-2006 12:15 AM
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