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发表于 27-3-2016 05:45 PM
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所以咯。。。如果刚好你是下面的人
上司叫你check grammar时。。你又不会
不是惨
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发表于 27-3-2016 05:47 PM
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tat94 发表于 27-3-2016 05:44 PM
"Today is a hot day with a yellowish sun rises highly in the blue sky. A tiger is hiding behind a tree while a group of rabbits is playing around there.I wonder whether the rabbits will become the prey of the tiger ? "
I can't get an answer for the question as the story above originate from facebook.
请看第50楼。。。有一个小更新
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发表于 27-3-2016 05:52 PM
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本帖最后由 tat94 于 27-3-2016 05:55 PM 编辑
都用quotation mark 说明是copy n paste ,about facebook , i miss this , it a mistake
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发表于 27-3-2016 05:55 PM
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你不是要改正的咩？
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发表于 27-3-2016 05:57 PM
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发表于 27-3-2016 05:58 PM
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50楼啊，那边有一些修正了.gif)
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发表于 27-3-2016 06:04 PM
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本帖最后由 tat94 于 27-3-2016 06:35 PM 编辑
"Today is a hot day with a yellowish sun rising highly in the blue sky. A tiger is hiding behind a tree while a group of rabbits is playing around there.I wonder whether the rabbits will be prey to the tiger ? "
I can't get an answer for the question as the story above originates from facebook.
----this kind of answer can at least get you an A- in spm
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发表于 27-3-2016 06:06 PM
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tat94 发表于 27-3-2016 06:04 PM
"Today is a hot day with a yellowish sun rises highly in the blue sky. A tiger is hiding behind a tree while a group of rabbits is playing around there.I wonder whether the rabbits will be the prey to the tiger ? "
I can't get an answer for the question as the story above originate from facebook.
----this kind of answer can at least get you an A- in spm
那个不是我写的好不好。。。你一楼一楼看上去
我是提出修正罢了不是写
而且还是有错误。。
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发表于 27-3-2016 06:08 PM
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where is the mistake 
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发表于 27-3-2016 06:25 PM
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tat94 发表于 27-3-2016 06:04 PM
"Today is a hot day with a yellowish sun rises highly in the blue sky. A tiger is hiding behind a tree while a group of rabbits is playing around there.I wonder whether the rabbits will be the prey to the tiger ? "
I can't get an answer for the question as the story above originate from facebook.
而且我的spm英文不是A-
那我也来造一个给你
"In the calm afternoon,the blazing sun ,which hangs in the blue sky, shines mercilessly on the scorched ground with no wind or breeze whistling blowing past.Behind an old oak tree,there's a ferocious young tiger camouflages himself well while observing some cute rabbits hopping around.In my mind,will those tiny creatures killed by the cruel tiger?"
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发表于 27-3-2016 06:35 PM
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本帖最后由 tat94 于 27-3-2016 06:39 PM 编辑
wongzhiwei 发表于 27-3-2016 06:25 PM
tat94 发表于 27-3-2016 06:04 PM
"Today is a hot day with a yellowish sun rises highly in the blue sky. A tiger is hiding behind a tree while a group of rabbits is playing around there.I wonder whether the rabbits will be the prey to the tiger ? "
I can't get an answer for the question as the story above originate from facebook.
而且我的spm英文不是A-
那我也来造一个给你
"In the calm afternoon,the blazing sun ,which hangs in the blue sky, shines mercilessly on the scorched ground with no wind or breeze whistling blowing past.Behind an old oak tree,there's a ferocious young tiger camouflages himself well while observing some cute rabbits hopping around.In my mind,will those tiny creatures killed by the cruel tiger?"
be prey to , it is a mistake
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发表于 27-3-2016 06:38 PM
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本帖最后由 tat94 于 27-3-2016 06:49 PM 编辑
wongzhiwei 发表于 27-3-2016 06:25 PM
tat94 发表于 27-3-2016 06:04 PM
"Today is a hot day with a yellowish sun rises highly in the blue sky. A tiger is hiding behind a tree while a group of rabbits is playing around there.I wonder whether the rabbits will be the prey to the tiger ? "
I can't get an answer for the question as the story above originate from facebook.
而且我的spm英文不是A-
那我也来造一个给你
"In the calm afternoon,the blazing sun ,which hangs in the blue sky, shines mercilessly on the scorched ground with no wind or breeze whistling blowing past.Behind an old oak tree,there's a ferocious young tiger camouflages himself well while observing some cute rabbits hopping around.In my mind,will those tiny creatures killed by the cruel tiger?"
The sun is above the sky, a tiger is hiding behind at a tree, the group of rabbit are play around there, will the rabbits be a lunch for the tiger? I don't know as this idea is not come from me
how do you want to explain the sentence " this idea is not come from me" n stop using flowery languages , make it simple you may be a male but you act like a female , i mean your way of thinking , be a man , act like a man , make it to be straightforward
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发表于 27-3-2016 09:26 PM
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我不会，还是你来吧。。 
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发表于 27-3-2016 10:08 PM
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be prey to 更本是错了啊
是完全错
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发表于 27-3-2016 10:18 PM
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tat94 发表于 27-3-2016 06:38 PM
The sun is above the sky, a tiger is hiding behind at a tree, the group of rabbit are play around there, will the rabbits be a lunch for the tiger? I don't know as this idea is not come from me
how do you want to explain the sentence " this idea is not come from me" n stop using flowery languages , make it simple you may be a male but you act like a female , i mean your way of thinking , be a man , act like a man , make it to be straightforward
is not come from me
这个应该是从华语直接翻译来的，英文中更本没有这样说的
how do you want to explain the sentence " this idea is not come from me" n stop using flowery languages , make it simple you may be a male but you act like a female , i mean your way of thinking , be a man , act like a man , make it to be straightforward
这里很多语病 不好意思哦
还有这些不是flowery language。这些多数是adjective罢了。如果写不出这些那么我spm的英文不是早就完蛋了
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发表于 27-3-2016 10:19 PM
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70楼有进阶版
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发表于 28-3-2016 06:13 AM
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本帖最后由 tat94 于 28-3-2016 06:28 AM 编辑
sure or not , i dont believe you can memorize all the idioms in a dictionary
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发表于 28-3-2016 09:02 AM
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发表于 28-3-2016 09:24 AM
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本帖最后由 wongzhiwei 于 28-3-2016 09:35 AM 编辑
你的英文是有很严重的问题你懂不懂'be'的
be 是 am,is,are,was,were这些
不是BE！
这里的be是verb懂吗？
所以才会有rabbits are prey to tiger。不是rabbits be prey to tiger.
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发表于 28-3-2016 09:25 AM
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什么意思 |
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